Wednesday, June 24, 2009

something im dislike about myself~~

What im dislike about myself??..huuhh...im always sleep in da evening..im always spend 2 to 3 hours to sleep.others than that,wim too talkative girl..im quite dificult to stop while im enjoyning having chat wif my buddy.im laugh too laudly,and i know that abad habit!!so terrible~~just disturbin' otherswhile chatting..then,im too sensitive girl.Everybody can make easy make me to cry.mybe bcause that is the common factor as a girl...when im cryin,it look to childish and sometimes till my eyes "swell like a gold fish"(said Mrs.Ling Siew Ming)..hahahaha.......
Posted by at

1 comment:

  1. b o o k b i n d e rJune 25, 2009 at 5:28 AM

    a nice start...
    but i think you can lose the "im" in most of your sentences. intead, just use "i".
    eg: what "im" dislike about myself
    change to: what "i" dislike about myself.
    ... and the same goes to the rest of your writing. alright?
    p/s: i agree with Mrs Ling!
    -madam H-

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)